I've more or less completed my short responses for my application with government. They are due in by midnight tonight. I plan on submitting them at 6:00pm tonight. I had one person go over them but he felt I needed to spend more time with them. I won't be posting those responses here for any Joe Schmoe but if anybody would be willing to go over them and give me suggestions for improvements, why, I'd be a measure more than grateful. Anything that can improve my responses means a better chance of proceeding to the next phase.
The responses are only about thirteen hundred characters each, and there are six of them. They might sound a bit stilted and lacking in flourish but a big part of that is that they literally cannot be longer than the limit, and for many I've had to slash things up to make things fit in each response. So if you want me to add something be aware that I often will have to take away from somewhere else.
Let me know here if you'd be interested and indicate your email (if applicable) and I'll email them.
