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Offline Ela

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Help me edit this sentence
« on: July 08, 2007, 11:52:34 AM »
I am trying to edit a powerpoint presentation.

I changed this sentence:
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Ongoing evaluation of outsourcing and distribution of publications

to the following:
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Evaluate outsourcing and distribution of publications

How do I convey the "ongoing" part from the original sentence concisely?

Things I thought of:
"On an ongoing basis" (too wordy)
"Regularly" (sounds blah)
"Routinely" (might work)

Other ideas?


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« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2007, 12:02:04 PM »
"Continue to evaluate . . ."

"Periodically evaluate . . ."
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« Reply #2 on: July 08, 2007, 12:29:43 PM »
Ongoingly?

I like "routinely" or "periodically" best, I think. I don't think "regularly" is so bad.
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« Reply #3 on: July 08, 2007, 12:58:59 PM »
Yeah, I ended up going with "regularly."

Thanks for your input. :)


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