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English & Linguistics / Re: I hate journalistic writing
« on: November 24, 2025, 07:16:52 AM »
Headline I saw today:
"Migraine Triggers May Have an Unexpected Twist"
The article was about how "surprisal" often led to migraine attacks in patients with chronic migraine, maybe and that the unexpectedness of the trigger seemed to matter more than the trigger itself.
I feel like this is a missed opportunity for "Migraine Triggers Have a Surprise Twist."
Unexpected is fine. Surprise would have been better with how often they used the word surprisal.
"Migraine Triggers May Have an Unexpected Twist"
The article was about how "surprisal" often led to migraine attacks in patients with chronic migraine, maybe and that the unexpectedness of the trigger seemed to matter more than the trigger itself.
I feel like this is a missed opportunity for "Migraine Triggers Have a Surprise Twist."
Unexpected is fine. Surprise would have been better with how often they used the word surprisal.
