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Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 10:35:09 AM
For some time now I've wondered about the Mormon dialect (which is not the same as the Utah dialect). It seems that Mormons are often very prone to use scriptural/Sacrament meeting talk vocabulary in writing, especially formal writing.

For example, at the student journal I work on (a journal about the English language), we received a submission that ended almost like a sacrament meeting talk. And I've noticed that lots of people love to use the word "liken" whenever possible (especially if it's followed by "unto").

Does this last one sound weird to anyone else? I'd much rather see "compare to" than "liken unto." Is it just me, or does it sound like the author is trying to wax scriptural?

Maybe one of these days I'll get around to doing a study on this so I can know if it's a real phenomenon.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 10, 2005, 10:38:12 AM
I think it is very common for mormons to start using scriptural language when we get formal.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 10:41:19 AM
But is the phrase "liken to" or "liken unto" at all common outside of Mormondom? It strikes me as a Mormon thing, but my perspective may be skewed.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 10, 2005, 10:45:06 AM
It sounds pretty Mormony, but I often can't remember if something is from the Book of Mormon or from the Bible.  For instance, while I know this phrase is in the BOM, I give it a 40% chance of being in the Bible.

I think this is pretty common.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 10:52:21 AM
According to a search on lds.org, it shows up four times in the Old Testament, five times in the New Testament, six times in the Book of Mormon, and five times in the D&C. But my question wasn't really whether it occurred outside the Book of Mormon, but whether anyone but Mormons use that phrase. That is, does anyone today outside the Mormon community use it?
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 10, 2005, 10:53:20 AM
So your question is "Do Mormons sound like Mormons?"?

edit: nevermind.  I see what you are saying.  And the answer from me is "It does sound Mormony, but I'm not positive."
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 11:00:17 AM
Hmm. I don't think I'm being very clear. Let me back up a bit.

Right now I'm editing a book that will be used a textbook here at BYU. It's (theoretically) about Latter-day Saint perspectives on world history, so it definitely has a religious flavor to it. However, it should still sound like a scholarly work, not a sacrament meeting talk.

The phrase "like unto" strikes me as something that Mormons use in talks and whatnot when they're trying to sound formal (that is, they switch into quasi-scriptural mode), but it feels out of place and a little bit silly and stilted in a textbook. Is this just my own personal feeling, or does it seem to have merit?
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 10, 2005, 11:02:36 AM
I agree with that feeling.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 11:08:30 AM
Okay, thanks. :)



I seem to remember having a conversation like this with someone before. My friend works in the writing center on campus, so he reads lots and lots of papers. We concluded that whenever Mormons try to sound formal, they end up sounding like they're bearing their testimony. We talked about studying the frequency of religious language in Mormon academic writing, but of course we never did anything about it.


Oh, and I just found another one: "inasmuch as." That one drives me nuts, especially when it's just used to mean "because" or "since."
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: rivka on March 10, 2005, 12:16:33 PM
I'd say it sounds awkward . . . and I'm the one who had someone point out to me recently that I'm the only person they know who uses the word "hence" in ordinary conversation.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 10, 2005, 06:01:44 PM
Thanks. That's validating.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Ryuko on March 10, 2005, 10:01:10 PM
I agree, it sounds a little awkward. I've never heard it used in a serious sense. Let's see... I have heard inasmuchas, but I'm in college, so whatev.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jaiden on March 12, 2005, 06:12:54 PM
I know Roman Catholics who use that phrasing (especially Priests).
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: sarcasticmuppet on March 12, 2005, 09:34:50 PM
what about "whithersoever".  I'm pretty sure that's exclusively mormon, when it's used at all.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 12, 2005, 10:10:21 PM
I've never heard that one before
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 13, 2005, 11:41:32 AM
I'm sure this sort of scriptural or religious language isn't exclusively a Mormon thing, but in my experience as an editor, I've noticed that a lot of Mormons use it in formal settings like academic papers.


And I've gotta go with Porter on that one. I don't think I've heard or seen "whithersoever" used outside of the scriptures (or other early modern English writings).
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: sarcasticmuppet on March 13, 2005, 04:15:02 PM
I say it once in a while because I like the sound of "whithersoever".
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Nathan Novak on March 13, 2005, 04:42:40 PM
I tried to explain to a 6 year old once that listening to jamie was a logical fallacy. The kid just stared at me and went back to his cartoons. This just felt like the right place to share said story.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: sarcasticmuppet on March 14, 2005, 07:25:53 AM
Actually, I use "withersoever" almost never.  My most common thing is to add the suffix "-eth" to everything.  Ex. "That stinketh."
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Porter on March 14, 2005, 07:27:08 AM
My favorite is [Homer]"Doheth!"[/Homer]. :D
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Taalcon on March 29, 2005, 10:04:32 AM
The use of "even" to mean "Especially". You hear that in every other Conference Talk.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on March 29, 2005, 10:24:25 AM
Ooh! That's a good one. Especially if they use it in the complete statement "Even so."
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: UofUlawguy on May 26, 2005, 05:29:39 PM
Just wanted to point out that "whithersoever" is not just for Mormons.  It appears, more than once, in one of the songs from the musical Man of La Mancha.  Cervantes/Don Quijote sings:

And the wild winds of fortune will carry me onward
Whithersoever they blow.
Whithersoever they blow, onward to glory I go.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on May 26, 2005, 08:47:09 PM
Yeah, but that's archaic writing, and furthermore, it's a translation. I imagine that few people use it today, even in formal contexts.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Primal Curve on May 26, 2005, 09:26:29 PM
I think a lot of the kind of phrasing you're referring to comes from the King James Version of the Bible. If memory serves, the Mormon Bible is the KJV with some, uh, "revelations" in it.

Anyways, I've heard that kind of terminology used in non-Mormon settings. It's especially common in Protestant denomonations that believe the KJV to be the only inspired translation of the Bible. The most notable being Baptists.

I don't see any of you guys going to Baptist church services so I can understand why you think it is exclusively Mormon.

I have also heard the language in Catholic churches.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on May 27, 2005, 08:10:04 AM
I know where this sort of language comes from. I'm just wondering how common it is outside of church. Like I said, I would see stuff fairly frequently in journal articles from professors.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Primal Curve on May 27, 2005, 10:31:24 AM
I didn't attend a religious university or a public university staffed mostly with religious people so I couldn't answer that question from that perspective. I'm sure if I had gone to Bob Jones University, Pensacola Christian College or Moody Bible Institute, I would have seen more of that kind of thing. However, I'd rather have had steel wool rammed into my tear ducts.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on May 27, 2005, 10:33:59 AM
Ouch. That sounds painful.  >.<  
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Noemon on May 27, 2005, 01:41:34 PM
"Liken" doesn't strike my ear as being particularly strange.  I'm sure I've used it in formal writing before, probably more than once.  "Liken unto", however, is something that it would never even occur to me to use.  The word "unto" strikes my ear as a very forced mannerism, and if I hear it spoken it trips my give-me-a-break-ometer.  If I came across it in, say, modern academic writing I'd probably laugh aloud, honestly.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on May 27, 2005, 01:51:21 PM
My thoughts exactly. Of course, I wasn't editing your run-of-the-mill academic writing; most of it was religious in nature. But even then, it just sounded phony and laughable.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Noemon on May 27, 2005, 02:06:25 PM
When you say that the academic writing was religious in nature, what do you mean exactly?  I took quite a few religious studies classes in college, but none of the secondary texts employed language reminiscent of that used in the primary texts.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Jonathon on May 27, 2005, 02:33:00 PM
Most of what we published came from the religion faculty at BYU, so lots of the articles were about things like the history of the church. One book was supposed to be some sort of history textbook from an LDS perspective, but it was sort of a train wreck—I've complained about it here before.

Is that any clearer? They were academic and religious, but not devotional or doctrinal.
Title: The Mormon dialect in writing
Post by: Noemon on May 28, 2005, 06:45:43 AM
Yeah, that clears it up completely.  Thanks!