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Title: Help me edit this sentence
Post by: Ela on July 08, 2007, 11:52:34 AM

I am trying to edit a powerpoint presentation.

I changed this sentence:

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Ongoing evaluation of outsourcing and distribution of publications

to the following:

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Evaluate outsourcing and distribution of publications

How do I convey the "ongoing" part from the original sentence concisely?

Things I thought of:
"On an ongoing basis" (too wordy)
"Regularly" (sounds blah)
"Routinely" (might work)

Other ideas?

Title: Help me edit this sentence
Post by: Tante Shvester on July 08, 2007, 12:02:04 PM

"Continue to evaluate . . ."

"Periodically evaluate . . ."

Title: Help me edit this sentence
Post by: Jonathon on July 08, 2007, 12:29:43 PM

Ongoingly?

I like "routinely" or "periodically" best, I think. I don't think "regularly" is so bad.

Title: Help me edit this sentence
Post by: Ela on July 08, 2007, 12:58:59 PM

Yeah, I ended up going with "regularly."

Thanks for your input. :)